10-19-2013, 12:56 AM
"stand by my side when i'm alone (well then you wouldn't be alone, would you)
walk with me on my journey
follow me down this long road" (oh dude, the journey and road were metaphors for life. Totally novel way of seeing it)
Sorry about being dickish, but it really reads like you just didn't give a shit when you wrote this. You should try to express something new or express an old feeling in a new way, and here it seems you decided, "Poetry is easy, just say something about a road and crying."
walk with me on my journey
follow me down this long road" (oh dude, the journey and road were metaphors for life. Totally novel way of seeing it)
Sorry about being dickish, but it really reads like you just didn't give a shit when you wrote this. You should try to express something new or express an old feeling in a new way, and here it seems you decided, "Poetry is easy, just say something about a road and crying."