Alone, yet Surrounded
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(07-19-2013, 01:15 AM)bpwill23 Wrote:  I speak to my self
knowing that the zombies
are just like everybody elseyou make this statement, but you don't tell me why. I picture zombies as very different than regular people. Dead, hungry for human flesh.. so I'd like to know in what way we are alike.

I sit quietly observing
the people surrounding me
not knowingin the first stanza you said "knowing that the zombies..." now you say "not knowing" which seems odd to me and you left it at that. Not knowing what?

sickened by evil
who am i to turn to
i hate the deceitful

realizing that i am my own pupil
I found my savior
and in returned showed me to his people he showed me his people

for I was never truly alone
I had God
Goodbye evil
I think I get the idea. Feeling alone, not sure who to turn to, finding God ? Could use some work explaining some parts though.
- Jenn
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Messages In This Thread
Alone, yet Surrounded - by bpwill23 - 07-19-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 08:32 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Viktor Vaughn - 10-18-2013, 05:44 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by tigrflye - 10-18-2013, 08:24 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by SirBrendan - 10-19-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by ThePinsir - 10-23-2013, 12:57 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by drithebee - 10-30-2013, 07:33 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Blunt - 11-01-2013, 12:47 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by Stephanie - 11-02-2013, 08:40 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by rowens - 11-03-2013, 06:47 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by MpoemsR - 11-03-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by alatos - 11-11-2013, 04:09 AM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 03:21 PM
RE: Alone, yet Surrounded - by beaufort - 11-12-2013, 08:52 PM



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