Punctuation Or Not

[ellajam]

whats wrong wiv it

I thought I couldn't put a period after breeze because the first two lines aren't a complete sentence.

They are. Write it out as a sentence, punctuate it, then break it back up:

Half glassed for winter, half screened to catch summer's breeze.
Your home sang your soul, cradled it during your stay, released it to soar in joy.

Thanks, I'm going to try to get this. I'm not sure why this is such a sticking point for me. English is my native language.