10-18-2013, 08:13 PM
(10-18-2013, 06:26 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:Thanks, I'm going to try to get this. I'm not sure why this is such a sticking point for me. English is my native language.(10-17-2013, 11:01 PM)ellajam Wrote:(10-17-2013, 03:40 PM)billy Wrote: whats wrong wiv itI thought I couldn't put a period after breeze because the first two lines aren't a complete sentence.
They are. Write it out as a sentence, punctuate it, then break it back up:
Half glassed for winter, half screened to catch summer's breeze.
Your home sang your soul, cradled it during your stay, released it to soar in joy.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips

