10-18-2013, 08:58 AM
(06-17-2013, 01:50 AM)Bunx Wrote: My poem for publets, Is publets even a word?The grammar and format need work
and all the nublets Or nublets? Is snoop dogg your idol? fo' shizzle my nizzle we keep it rizzle in this crizzle. Just making up words to rhyme
that happen to be reading,
seeding or feeding the Good haha, we're either having sex or eating, those are usually the cases aren't they haha. As long as I get fucked and fed and then I'm off to bed
hungry of the mind. Not just the mind
nublets please, listen close
for though i tend to hear the most Capitalize "i"
random things in an afternoon.
it doesn't mean one still can not You ended last line with a period, but didn't capitalize the start of this sentence/line.
play near the moon.
piglets come here and close. Now here is a real word that ends with lets
you may die tomorrow, but
to your end, we shall brost. Is brost a word? Oh no not again
with beer and your body of coarse. I think you mean of course
at least some can die,
without the thoughts of remorse.
remorse, feel me now. for Capitalize "for" it looks to be the start of a sentence, you know, judging of of the previous word having a period.
thou art everything that you are now.
i can feel you or i can die Capitalize 'i" how'd you miss that twice in one line?
like a pig. or the moon can be I think you meant to put a comma in this line, not a period.
like guiding light till the end.
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
Because none of that will matter when death visits


