Suicide Number 10,214,213,134

[tectak]

I feel that some of your lines are too long and your rhymes are forced, lol!!! Very sardonic, poking fun at the free verse suicide rash this October brings. Nonetheless, you should have had almost a week to find a rhyme for phalloides, as you picked an awfully slow acting poison in alpha-amanitin.

PS: ‘Avoid this’ is probably a better rhyme than ‘I was’.

By the way, this could have been a better round 'trip’ had you eaten Amanita muscaria and sought out the proper Shaman!

I'm never without A. muscaria!
Best,
Tom