Maybe Love

[Malu]

I can't stop feeling a tickling feel, Reads a bit awkward
when you come outta blistering cold
and come closer until your nose is pressed
against mine.

And I find it kinda funny when you flicker
with your roe deer black, eyes. I think this line would read better without the comma. Also most deer have black eyes so I'm not sure if there is meaning behind roe, because if there isn't, I think this line would be the same without it
And my wild instrument pressed against my chest
assists me with it's raw sound not to ever
forget that look that you sometimes have;
when you're at peace.

Often, it makes me moody when you are melancholic,
but I'm always there.

Usually, I can't stop feeling that I'm falling in something Just a suggestion, maybe instead of "in" you put "into", both work though.
that I had forgotten about a great long time ago.

Now, your smile just makes me wake up at night,
just to dream about you while I'm awake. Made me think of Aerosmith's I Don't Want To Miss A Thing, great song

I enjoyed the imagery of the first half. I think this could use a tad more attention with grammar, hope this helps. Thanks for the read