Room at the Inn
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a bit of personification maybe fescribe the men as statues to topple , or an allusion to describe them, bring the hearth in the inn alive with its dancing tongues of flame, give the scene a domain, show the world you are trying to create, a little decription totally changes the color
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Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-12-2013, 02:29 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 02:55 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-12-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by RyanRader13 - 10-12-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-12-2013, 03:33 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Malu - 10-12-2013, 08:16 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Laura Marx - 10-12-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by tigrflye - 10-13-2013, 05:09 PM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-16-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Gritdog - 10-17-2013, 08:16 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Nick - 10-19-2013, 01:04 AM
RE: Room at the Inn - by Gritdog - 10-19-2013, 02:15 AM



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