in the swifts of solitude

[tigrflye]

Swimming my way along
The fish part along another along?
Silvery fins barely touch ok, good.. a solid image for me to imagine
No imprints on the river bedI kinda like this untouched feeling
Hoping to reach the shore
I give my best stroke
Waves along the shore,another shore?
I wave back by half
Can hardly swim with a hand, no?I don't understand the ending

I think this poem is pretty simple. I like the idea of swimming somewhere that is virtually untouched. I think it has a long way to go to transform into greatness. More experienced writers have pointed out to me that each line does not need to start with a Capital Letter. If your next line is the middle of a sentence, leave it lowercase. It is easier to read.
I wave back by half? Can hardly swim with a hand?