in the swifts of solitude

[Malu]

Swimming my way along
The fish part along
Silvery fins barely touch
No imprints on the river bed
Hoping to reach the shore
I give my best stroke
Waves along the shore,
I wave back by half
Can hardly swim with a hand, no?

The two lines that both end with along, and the two lines that both end with shore seemed to take away a little bit from this poem because they didn't read well, at least to me it did. "Swimming my way along, the fish part along" reads weird. My suggestion would be to substitute some of these words.