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10-09-2013, 06:12 AM
Quote:Screams of pain counter a voice forever silencedGood edit, it really clarified this line for me.  You can read here for the site's advice on how to edit without losing the original. It's great to see you working on this.
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Was it? - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 02:05 AM
RE: Was it? - by Malu - 10-08-2013, 03:43 AM
RE: Was it? - by Mogra - 10-08-2013, 04:28 AM
RE: Was it? - by Malu - 10-08-2013, 04:53 AM
RE: Was it? - by ellajam - 10-08-2013, 10:24 PM
RE: Was it? - by Glittercake - 10-08-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: Was it? - by Mogra - 10-09-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: Was it? - by ellajam - 10-09-2013, 06:12 AM
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