Two paths
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This is an interesting take on the whole "Two roads diverged..." but the last line is weak because it's a cliche and the line breaks here could also use some work, I think. "or" or "and" are generally not good places to break a line.
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Two paths - by Sonata - 10-02-2013, 11:55 PM
RE: Two paths - by whatispoetry? - 10-07-2013, 11:34 AM



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