I loved you
#6
Sorry, it takes what seems like forever to mend a broken heart. Use poetry to vent, cleanse, renew.
You poem seems to hold back. Just playing with your poem and thinking of one of my lost loves:

Your reflection in my mirror remains,
but it is hollow.

I still taste your love
on my lips,

but why?

It was a despicable lie.

Goodbye—
doesn’t lessen the pain.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
I loved you - by Sonata - 10-02-2013, 11:24 PM
RE: I loved you - by newsclippings - 10-02-2013, 11:27 PM
RE: I loved you - by Erthona - 10-02-2013, 11:38 PM
RE: I loved you - by bena - 10-02-2013, 11:49 PM
RE: I loved you - by Sonata - 10-02-2013, 11:53 PM
RE: I loved you - by tectak - 10-03-2013, 12:47 AM
RE: I loved you - by ChristopherSea - 10-03-2013, 12:25 AM



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