10-02-2013, 11:04 PM
Abstract does not mean unintelligible.
"an undergrowth of transfer"
You got to be kidding, right?
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"Divinely warm, and chosen to be
describes only coldness, in a wind I can't see."
Pure gibberish held together by a rhyme. You realize there is no subject in this sentence...don't you? Question, what wind can you see?
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"It is said that good poets try and confuse the readers by removing words, changing words around, etc"
Good poets do not try and confuse the reader, they try and make clear that which is difficult. Poetry is not a trick to be playe. Poetry lies in inspiration not manipulation.
Dale
"an undergrowth of transfer"
You got to be kidding, right?
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"Divinely warm, and chosen to be
describes only coldness, in a wind I can't see."
Pure gibberish held together by a rhyme. You realize there is no subject in this sentence...don't you? Question, what wind can you see?
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"It is said that good poets try and confuse the readers by removing words, changing words around, etc"
Good poets do not try and confuse the reader, they try and make clear that which is difficult. Poetry is not a trick to be playe. Poetry lies in inspiration not manipulation.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.