Alright
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"Gangrene enthusiasm, parasite smile,"

I'm not sure "Gangrene" is the word you want to pair up with "enthusiasm". Maybe pair diseased (or another synonym) with enthusiasm, as it seems you wish to infect someone, which comes across with "parasite smile". I would use "parasitic" instead of the noun form.


Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Alright - by Wjames - 09-29-2013, 04:33 AM
RE: Alright - by dontwantusername - 10-02-2013, 07:03 AM
RE: Alright - by Erthona - 10-02-2013, 02:27 PM
RE: Alright - by leftover sushi - 10-02-2013, 03:32 PM
RE: Alright - by bena - 10-03-2013, 01:34 AM



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