Tanka 26th July
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Not really a "Tanka" is it? Not that I care, as I find the distinctions on these supposed Japanese forms silly, but it you are going to call it such...

"the labyrinth
has two exits"

Don't all labyrinths have two exists?

I'm guessing this might have something to do with fireworks, but that is more because of the title. Evidently the central idea is maze as metaphor, but what that is suppose to be escapes me.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Tanka 26th July - by Magpie - 07-27-2013, 01:25 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by soonforgotten? - 07-27-2013, 06:43 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Jim Steele - 09-22-2013, 03:59 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Erthona - 10-01-2013, 02:46 AM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Magpie - 10-01-2013, 03:11 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Malu - 10-06-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by Erthona - 10-04-2013, 06:30 PM
RE: Tanka 26th July - by emerald13 - 10-22-2013, 04:08 PM



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