A Likely Story

[billy]

All movie referencs were unintentional.

That is a blatant lie.
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it's poetry not true dare kiss command or promise. please keep comment to the poem. /mod

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I see your eyes dart
down,
to the left.

I was born
infinite yesterdays ago.

You will be able to fool me
when you can catch a fly,
with chopsticks,
on your first try.

Grasshopper, grasshopper...
Your eyes are translucent.
I hardly need to sqint, squint
to see exactly what I'm looking for.

A bluff.

Go ahead sir.
Buy some more chips.
I'll be here all night.

I am a nocturnal shark,
and you, sir, are a sleeping tuna.

i like the vignettes and how they're all connected by the title through varying types of bullshit artists. see if cutting some of the smaller words make it more twattish.

You will be able to fool me

feels a bit drawn out

you'll fool me
when you catch flies
with chopsticks
on your attempt (fry and try made feel like a rhyme scheme was going to be used )