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09-29-2013, 09:40 AM
(08-22-2013, 11:45 PM)grey raven Wrote: A warming sun returns againI like the image this poem paints. I don't think "It" in L2 is needed. There's something about the last line that disturbs the flow for me. I think it's the "is letting". Thanks for the read. |
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summer - by grey raven - 08-22-2013, 11:45 PM
RE: summer - by ChristopherSea - 08-23-2013, 12:35 AM
RE: summer - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:26 AM
RE: summer - by KCarey - 09-24-2013, 04:51 AM
RE: summer - by Keith - 09-24-2013, 05:36 AM
RE: summer - by Dreamer - 09-28-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: summer - by Volaticus - 09-29-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: summer - by Versify - 09-29-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: summer - by tectak - 09-30-2013, 07:46 PM
RE: summer - by Erthona - 09-30-2013, 10:49 PM
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