Under Trees (edit #1)
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Hundred-ringed trunks lean,
limbs stretched north in unison,
full force tug on roots' stronghold.
We listen closely,
hoping not to hear
the roar of brutes unloosed.

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Fear rises as winds increase.
Hundred-ringed trunks lean,
limbs stretched north in unison,
full force tug on roots' stronghold.
We listen closely,
hoping not to hear
the roar of giants unbound.
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Under Trees (edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-29-2013, 03:21 AM
RE: Under Trees - by cidermaid - 09-29-2013, 02:47 PM
RE: Under Trees - by ellajam - 09-29-2013, 08:51 PM
RE: Under Trees - by Erthona - 09-30-2013, 12:01 PM
RE: Under Trees - by ellajam - 09-30-2013, 08:47 PM
RE: Under Trees (edit #1) - by bena - 10-01-2013, 08:34 AM
RE: Under Trees (edit #1) - by ellajam - 10-01-2013, 08:58 AM
RE: Under Trees (edit #1) - by JunKai - 10-04-2013, 06:00 AM
RE: Under Trees (edit #1) - by ellajam - 10-04-2013, 06:21 AM



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