Sharon Frost

[Nick]

Love it. But it seems kind of.. empty.
But nevertheless, it tells a great story.
Very Relatable.
Keep up the good work![/b]

"empty"
Yeah. That's it. That is what I want the piece to convey. How an event that happened over forty years ago created a space inside the writer that cannot be filled.

And that the writer learned from that and wants to offer the reader a bit of info on how things can go.

Thanks for posting your impressions.