09-24-2013, 08:54 PM
Thanks for reading, AJ, nitpick away, that's the fun of this place.
I appreciate your gentle comments.
Ha, Todd, foiled by a title again. I tack them on here so as not to name the thread Untitled, but don't think about the effect they have on the poem. Maybe if I thought of better titles I wouldn't have to drop so many opening lines.
Thanks as always for your great editing ideas, even in Fun you guys make me work.
I appreciate your gentle comments.Ha, Todd, foiled by a title again. I tack them on here so as not to name the thread Untitled, but don't think about the effect they have on the poem. Maybe if I thought of better titles I wouldn't have to drop so many opening lines.
Thanks as always for your great editing ideas, even in Fun you guys make me work.
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