09-24-2013, 04:22 PM
Hi ella,
This has a lovely soft edge of innocence and yet sexual tension running through it. It makes me think of a first (Undisclosed) date with new eyes of an old friend or flame. It is very sweet. (and i mean this in a good way rather than demeaning).
The only nit I had was I found the use of revealing too loose for the intent behind what i read into the suggestion. (...and yes by this I mean those blasted "ing" things again!).
A lovely read AJ.
This has a lovely soft edge of innocence and yet sexual tension running through it. It makes me think of a first (Undisclosed) date with new eyes of an old friend or flame. It is very sweet. (and i mean this in a good way rather than demeaning).
The only nit I had was I found the use of revealing too loose for the intent behind what i read into the suggestion. (...and yes by this I mean those blasted "ing" things again!).
A lovely read AJ.