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Selective Frugality
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09-24-2013, 01:28 AM
(09-23-2013, 10:41 PM)Volaticus Wrote: It feels a little wordy and telly. Maybe you could condense it some to make the message stand out stronger. JMHO.Thanks, I'm trying to show rather than tell, but for this it is a little tricky for me to think of something that captures my message. And condensing probably would help, thanks for the feedback 
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Selective Frugality - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: Selective Frugality - by Volaticus - 09-23-2013, 10:41 PM
RE: Selective Frugality - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 01:28 AM
RE: Selective Frugality - by Erthona - 09-24-2013, 07:29 AM
RE: Selective Frugality - by Malu - 09-24-2013, 07:35 AM
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