I'm scrapin'

I'm scrapin'

~~bena~~ Offline

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09-23-2013, 05:59 AM

feels like a song to me. Or I could make it one. Todd definitely pinpointed the best stanza for me. It is a bit wandering and all over the place. It needs maybe something to bring all the scattered thoughts together. But I do really like the way it flows.

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I'm scrapin' - by Nick - 09-21-2013, 02:54 AM

RE: I'm scrapin' - by rowens - 09-22-2013, 12:24 AM

RE: I'm scrapin' - by Nick - 09-24-2013, 02:40 AM

RE: I'm scrapin' - by bena - 09-23-2013, 05:59 AM

RE: I'm scrapin' - by Erthona - 09-23-2013, 02:01 PM

RE: I'm scrapin' - by Erthona - 09-24-2013, 08:00 AM

RE: I'm scrapin' - by Nick - 09-25-2013, 06:15 AM

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