09-22-2013, 03:59 PM
As somebody who seems to run a boarding house for perplexed moths like this one, I got a kick out of this. Good decision on making it such a short poem - so much more effective this way.
Also, the short lines (that you can't help but read rapidly) seem to have the same rhythm as a moth bumping into something continuously. Was that intentional, I wonder?
Also, the short lines (that you can't help but read rapidly) seem to have the same rhythm as a moth bumping into something continuously. Was that intentional, I wonder?

