Eternal sentinels
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(09-20-2013, 10:47 AM)ellajam Wrote:  Really moving, he's so alive and your last two lines are a stab through the heart. I couldn't change a word. A privilege to read this fine piece.
Thank you ellajam, much appreciated. TOMH

(09-20-2013, 01:15 PM)abigailholloway Wrote:  It's beautiful and touching, nostalgic and sad. The last lines really hit it home. It recreates that feeling you have when you're little, the secret of your stuffed animal being alive. I love this.
Thanks Abigail. TOMH

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Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-20-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by ellajam - 09-20-2013, 10:47 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-21-2013, 03:25 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by abigailholloway - 09-20-2013, 01:15 PM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-22-2013, 07:25 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by cidermaid - 09-22-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-24-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by bena - 09-23-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by mortal - 09-25-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: Eternal sentinels - by Keith - 09-26-2013, 09:04 AM



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