09-21-2013, 03:25 AM
(09-20-2013, 10:47 AM)ellajam Wrote: Really moving, he's so alive and your last two lines are a stab through the heart. I couldn't change a word. A privilege to read this fine piece.Thank you ellajam, much appreciated. TOMH
(09-20-2013, 01:15 PM)abigailholloway Wrote: It's beautiful and touching, nostalgic and sad. The last lines really hit it home. It recreates that feeling you have when you're little, the secret of your stuffed animal being alive. I love this.Thanks Abigail. TOMH
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