Walking in Snow shoes.

[Keith]

My bad...my ability to reverse letters and numbers is boundless. (I thought i had cut n pasted how it was spelt from the practice threads...obviously not). Thanks for the correction.

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Milo please move as you see fit, i have no objections either way. Was thinking that I would be able to gather the comments into the mentoring thread in the order that they were given by doing it this way, but it will not actually make any differance ...Duh me!

Actually its my bad I started it I like to make up words that are close to the one's I should have used, sorry for the confusion. K

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First, thanks for this thread and the amazing transformation of this poem.

What is a Conchalonn? It stumps google and I couldn't find it in the glossary here.

Conachlon

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@ Keith. Okay...as you can see i've moved the whole thread to serious. (Will move back to mentoring after it is done here).
My appreciation for all of the time and support that you have given this to date.

Note to Milo. No idea if moving the whole thread for workshoping is what you had in mind for how this stage might work, but seemed a sensible way to go about it , for now I've left a re-direct only on the mentoring thread. Please give me a nudge if this does not fit with your ideas.

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Current edit at top of 1st page with original post, or most recent edit can be found in post directly above .

My original intent was to post the mentored poem into serious as a new thread and leave this one here for people to study the process later but you can do as you wish.

I think you should just post the current edit of the poem and take the feedback without any preconceptions based on the milo thread. That way its clean and clear. AJ and I can then discuss the feedback and use it to decide next steps. Keith