I'd be tempted to remove "dry" instead actually. That way you keep the same number of beats, even though the syllables are reduced.
And don't be nervous. Most people are just happy to receive any kind of feedback that shows their poem has been read and appreciated on some level. If you can read it, you're the kind of person they want to hear from
And don't be nervous. Most people are just happy to receive any kind of feedback that shows their poem has been read and appreciated on some level. If you can read it, you're the kind of person they want to hear from
It could be worse