Misconceptions

[Keith]

This one gets a from me.
Every line reads like a mini senyru. Packed full of gritty images.
Difficult to pick a best loved line...like all of them

Thanks AJ much appreciated. Keith

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Quireboy? Is that an attempt to somehow amalgamate queer to choir? Is deaf meant to be death? Maybe a written speech impediment or ebonics?

Those nits aside, I really like the first three lines and they complete a "cheeky lil' piece" .

The final two lines are erroneous and detract from the experience IMHO.

Hi Aish good to see you posting again, Quire just me being a numty for a change. Deaf is deaf so without voice, choirboys look like guppies dying. will change choir. Ta Keith