09-18-2013, 05:53 AM
(09-09-2013, 07:42 AM)Bunx Wrote: really enjoyed this poem! for capture one of the mysterious elements of life, fear of the unknown,and in my opinion the importance of history.Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it
"I fell to my hands and knees
And froze
As there was nothing but emptiness in front of me
But everything behind"
i like theme of hesitation here in the form of elements and environment. that where one is on the path may be somewhere with a difficult direction or none to take.
thanks alot for the post!

