Four day weekend
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(09-14-2013, 03:06 AM)Malu Wrote:  
(09-13-2013, 04:50 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  Sorry this one is a bit of a miss for me.
I'm not getting much overall and I cannot make any connect with with water paves the way. If this is a referance to water sports, I need more to feed the image in. Specifically think line two does not carry much weight in the poem. Perhaps give this one some attention.
AJ.
School got cancelled for two days because of rain, flash flooding. So water literally paved the way, as in 5,000 cubic feet every second
Either you don't know what literal means or you don't know what pave means.
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Four day weekend - by Malu - 09-13-2013, 06:17 AM
RE: Four day weekend - by cidermaid - 09-13-2013, 04:50 PM
RE: Four day weekend - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 03:06 AM
RE: Four day weekend - by milo - 09-17-2013, 09:02 PM
RE: Four day weekend - by billy - 09-17-2013, 02:35 PM
RE: Four day weekend - by Malu - 09-18-2013, 02:15 AM
RE: Four day weekend - by milo - 09-18-2013, 02:48 AM
RE: Four day weekend - by Malu - 09-18-2013, 03:00 AM



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