One step closer.
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Dyslexia, sometimes it is worse than at other times. I guess I was just thinking of the "sitting" which is trochee, but then it does mostly go in iambs. Of course I would have had to change her words to make it one way or the other. I think this reads smoothly enough,

but yes, Savanna it is mostly in iambs, and not trochee, my mistake.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

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One step closer. - by Savanna - 09-14-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: One step closer. - by rowens - 09-14-2013, 10:56 AM
RE: One step closer. - by Savanna - 09-14-2013, 02:14 PM
RE: One step closer. - by Erthona - 09-14-2013, 07:51 PM
RE: One step closer. - by milo - 09-15-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: One step closer. - by Savanna - 09-14-2013, 10:06 PM
RE: One step closer. - by Erthona - 09-17-2013, 01:05 PM



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