09-17-2013, 12:10 PM
"cannot bear what
you had to offer"
I'd like to hear your reasoning for the tense change here. It rings as off, but that may be just what you want.
A lovely read.
you had to offer"
I'd like to hear your reasoning for the tense change here. It rings as off, but that may be just what you want.
A lovely read.
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