09-17-2013, 12:01 PM
i really want to understand this because i like it.
the title sort of explains the poem is about moving on but not just yet.
then on the other hand it feels a little like the 1st person is angry with
2nd person who passed on.
anyway, if i had constructive feedback it would be to let me in on it a bit more
thanks for the read.
the title sort of explains the poem is about moving on but not just yet.
then on the other hand it feels a little like the 1st person is angry with
2nd person who passed on.
anyway, if i had constructive feedback it would be to let me in on it a bit more
thanks for the read.