09-15-2013, 06:24 AM
(09-14-2013, 07:47 AM)Leanne Wrote: Ooh-aah, that's rude!Thanks Leanne, not sure how Mr Benn got in there
I like what's going on with the rhymes -- I'd love to see the meter fixed up a little bit but that's a minor problem since it's all for fun. Nice to see Mr Benn making an appearance, if only in a simile
I have had a small tweak with the meter. Best Keith(09-14-2013, 09:15 AM)Savanna Wrote: haha...cute..I love it..Thanks Savanna glad you liked it. Bets TOMH
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