09-14-2013, 03:06 AM
(09-13-2013, 04:50 PM)cidermaid Wrote: Sorry this one is a bit of a miss for me.Rain, flash flooding. So water literally paved the way, as in 5,000 cubic feet every second
I'm not getting much overall and I cannot make any connect with with water paves the way. If this is a referance to water sports, I need more to feed the image in. Specifically think line two does not carry much weight in the poem. Perhaps give this one some attention.
AJ.