As the Gods of Man Reclaim Earth

[metalfan91]

I'd rearrange the wording in second stanza of the edited poem.

"The atmosphere sears
A pyramid metroplis sags
Bleeding itself"

=A pyramid metropolis sags
Under an atmosphere searing
Bleeding itself

Or something like that/ the rest of the poems flow is good.

That's a good idea, Elsie! I will try something like that.