09-12-2013, 09:43 AM
This may work as a series of limericks. I'll come back to it.
Okay, poems about writing poems, well it's tough, even if you're John Keats musing on the challenges of romantic poetry. But your main problem here is that it's just an awkward contorting of the English Language. Look at the syntax in your first line: are you thinking " I'm tucked into my nest?"
You may want to start out in novice or mild. I don't want to go through the whole thing and pick at you overmuch.
What's "Accuracy must rule for a word lost a crime"?
Welcome though, and I'm glad you're here. The poem does have a refreshing sense of humor.
Okay, poems about writing poems, well it's tough, even if you're John Keats musing on the challenges of romantic poetry. But your main problem here is that it's just an awkward contorting of the English Language. Look at the syntax in your first line: are you thinking " I'm tucked into my nest?"
You may want to start out in novice or mild. I don't want to go through the whole thing and pick at you overmuch.
What's "Accuracy must rule for a word lost a crime"?
Welcome though, and I'm glad you're here. The poem does have a refreshing sense of humor.