Three Haikus
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(09-11-2013, 02:13 AM)Malu Wrote:  Sweetheart

She needs a Hero
To rescue her from Herself
I'm not Superman


Is it Over?

As blue turns to red
My eyes slowly start to close
Surrounded by white


Grey Skies

Now up to bat, God
Nothing escapes the Clashing
Protected by Streaks
no need for caps in the shorts, for me they read more like senryu, i like the idea of the first one. it's like your saying [i'm not interested thanks very much]
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Three Haikus - by Malu - 09-11-2013, 02:13 AM
RE: Three Haikus - by Volaticus - 09-11-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: Three Haikus - by Malu - 09-11-2013, 10:11 AM
RE: Three Haikus - by Malu - 09-13-2013, 04:11 PM
RE: Three Haikus - by billy - 09-11-2013, 01:15 PM
RE: Three Haikus - by Malu - 09-12-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Three Haikus - by billy - 09-17-2013, 02:38 PM
RE: Three Haikus - by Malu - 09-18-2013, 02:12 AM



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