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09-10-2013, 06:57 AM
Perhaps make "my country tis of thee" a theme, refering now and then to patriotic things? I agree with rowens that the breaking up line is actually the weakest; maybe don't say it directly, but hint at it. For what it's worth, I do like the semi-automatic potato lines (though I don't have that oven setting
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semi-automatic potato - by leftover sushi - 09-10-2013, 12:16 AM
RE: semi-automatic potato - by rowens - 09-10-2013, 03:30 AM
RE: semi-automatic potato - by betalife - 09-10-2013, 04:20 AM
RE: semi-automatic potato - by PoetryAndPhysics - 09-10-2013, 06:57 AM
RE: semi-automatic potato - by ScurryFunger - 09-10-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: semi-automatic potato - by ScurryFunger - 09-10-2013, 07:34 AM
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