Making Use of the White Space
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I think this is a good illustration of how all the space surrounding Judas Iscariot can be used by a poem.

Saint Judas

When I went out to kill myself, I caught
A pack of hoodlums beating up a man.
Running to spare his suffering, I forgot
My name, my number, how my day began,
How soldiers milled around the garden stone
And sang amusing songs; how all that day
Their javelins measured crowds; how I alone
Bargained the proper coins, and slipped away.

Banished from heaven, I found this victim beaten,
Stripped, kneed, and left to cry. Dropping my rope
Aside, I ran, ignored the uniforms:
Then I remembered bread my flesh had eaten,
The kiss that ate my flesh. Flayed without hope,
I held the man for nothing in my arms.

James Arlington Wright
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Making Use of the White Space - by btrudo - 09-09-2013, 11:52 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-10-2013, 01:33 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by btrudo - 09-10-2013, 01:51 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-10-2013, 02:21 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by btrudo - 09-10-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-10-2013, 05:18 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by btrudo - 09-10-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-10-2013, 07:32 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by billy - 09-10-2013, 08:38 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by billy - 09-10-2013, 09:31 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by trueenigma - 09-15-2013, 06:38 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-15-2013, 06:41 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by bena - 09-19-2013, 10:29 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-19-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by bena - 09-19-2013, 10:52 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 09-19-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by ellajam - 09-19-2013, 10:38 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by Erthona - 04-14-2014, 02:02 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 04-14-2014, 10:41 PM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by Erthona - 04-15-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by Leanne - 04-15-2014, 05:13 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by tectak - 04-15-2014, 06:15 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by milo - 04-15-2014, 06:17 AM
RE: Making Use of the White Space - by ellajam - 04-15-2014, 08:26 PM



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