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in the swifts of solitude
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09-09-2013, 05:58 PM
me personally the only lines that I really liked were the last two ones. It's a nice riddle, the sort you achieve when one is reaching the point of extreme exertion, where it's not clear, if you wave, or you've become the wave, whether the back is your back, or just the direction that the current relentlessly keeps thrashing you into...
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in the swifts of solitude - by shenaz - 09-06-2013, 07:19 PM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by Spikerider - 09-07-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by shenaz - 09-07-2013, 05:26 AM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by expiring_touch - 09-09-2013, 05:58 PM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by shenaz - 09-09-2013, 07:11 PM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by Malu - 10-10-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by shenaz - 10-10-2013, 06:12 PM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by tectak - 10-11-2013, 04:36 AM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by shenaz - 10-11-2013, 03:56 PM
RE: in the swifts of solitude - by tigrflye - 10-11-2013, 05:15 AM
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