09-09-2013, 12:45 PM
Great advise, thank you, this is just what I came for. 
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I've always been on the fence about the "write" thing. This poem is four years old, and in its last incarnation the voting was only slightly in favor of cute.
A kitchen can is one of those small waste baskets under the sink, a domestic image I thought was universal, but I guess not
)I've always been on the fence about the "write" thing. This poem is four years old, and in its last incarnation the voting was only slightly in favor of cute.
A kitchen can is one of those small waste baskets under the sink, a domestic image I thought was universal, but I guess not
"In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite." - Paul Dirac (1902 - 1984)