09-09-2013, 06:41 AM
Great, firstly I think its important for me to say I really enjoyed your poem, but for now I will leave it at that. So then, lets get started.
One approach would be to strip this bare with blunt explanations of each stanza i.e. what you want to tell the reader and the main points you want to put over. I will have my own thoughts that are just that, my own. But we need to have the same understanding for this to go any where. I guess this is a bit weird because we wouldn't normally have people watching, so to speak.
What do you think ? do you feel comfortable with that approach ?
One approach would be to strip this bare with blunt explanations of each stanza i.e. what you want to tell the reader and the main points you want to put over. I will have my own thoughts that are just that, my own. But we need to have the same understanding for this to go any where. I guess this is a bit weird because we wouldn't normally have people watching, so to speak.
What do you think ? do you feel comfortable with that approach ?
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