09-08-2013, 04:15 PM
tecktack has said what's needed to be said i think, and you've got the right attitude as to how you accept feedback :J:
on the cliche remark; in general cliche is a no no, some parody may use it it but then it has to be used skilfully. it has to be extra witty or clever. to simply use cliche because you can isn't reason enough to use it. you're poetry will improve tenfold if you refuse to use cliche.
on the cliche remark; in general cliche is a no no, some parody may use it it but then it has to be used skilfully. it has to be extra witty or clever. to simply use cliche because you can isn't reason enough to use it. you're poetry will improve tenfold if you refuse to use cliche.