09-08-2013, 09:05 AM
he puts the shits up me as well 
i wonder if this would be better in the for fun section?
while it gave me a wry smile, it feels more prose than poetry.
i'd like there to have been some poetic devices in there; thinks like simile, assonance, alliteration etc.
i wonder if this would be better in the for fun section?
while it gave me a wry smile, it feels more prose than poetry.
i'd like there to have been some poetic devices in there; thinks like simile, assonance, alliteration etc.