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New Year
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09-07-2013, 10:39 AM
I liked the imagery in general, and the use of the sensory description. My only real nit to pick is with the lazy rhyme of leave/trees. Keep writing!
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RE: New Year - by Reilley - 09-07-2013, 10:39 AM
RE: New Year - by betalife - 09-09-2013, 04:36 AM
RE: New Year - by PoetryAndPhysics - 09-09-2013, 08:35 AM
RE: New Year - by ScurryFunger - 09-10-2013, 08:29 AM
RE: New Year - by billy - 09-10-2013, 11:23 AM
RE: New Year - by ChristopherSea - 09-10-2013, 09:48 PM
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