in the swifts of solitude

[shenaz]

I liked it until the last line, I don't get it.

Swimming my way along
The fish part along
Silvery fins barely touch
No imprints on the river bed
Hoping to reach the shore
I give my best stroke
Waves along the shore,
I wave back by half
Can hardly swim with a hand, no?

The last line is a rhetorical question, like I am telling myself I need to put more effort in helping me than in pleasing others. Hence.I don't have to get too invested in people's reactions. I translated the last line for yoruba. Thanks for the critique