09-07-2013, 05:19 AM
I liked it until the last line, I don't get it.
(09-06-2013, 07:19 PM)shenaz Wrote: Swimming my way along
The fish part along
Silvery fins barely touch
No imprints on the river bed
Hoping to reach the shore
I give my best stroke
Waves along the shore,
I wave back by half
Can hardly swim with a hand, no?
The ghost of my horse Spike runs with me always..!