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In On the Outs
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09-06-2013, 01:56 PM
This reads nostalgic, maybe because it reminds me of my hometown and the surrounding areas. Then it moves on to great longing in the end. I'm not sure I entirely get it either, but I enjoyed the read.
Sorry if this isn't entirely helpful, as I've never given feedback or criticism for poetry until now. |
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In On the Outs - by Owlster Bierce - 09-06-2013, 07:57 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by billy - 09-06-2013, 09:14 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by Erthona - 09-06-2013, 10:24 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by tramiant - 09-06-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: In On the Outs - by betalife - 09-07-2013, 01:45 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by Spikerider - 09-07-2013, 05:22 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by milo - 09-07-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by ScurryFunger - 09-07-2013, 07:09 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by Owlster Bierce - 09-07-2013, 07:22 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by betalife - 09-07-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: In On the Outs - by Reilley - 09-07-2013, 11:57 AM
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