Why, Sir?
#7
That it ain't a use to ask for "how?"
seems that line was a little forced. rewording it would make this as solid as the rest of the poem.
also, id have to agree that 'cold world' is a bit over used.
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Why, Sir? - by ellz483 - 09-03-2013, 03:36 AM
RE: Why, Sir? - by Elsie Fillmore - 09-04-2013, 08:08 AM
RE: Why, Sir? - by Volaticus - 09-04-2013, 10:53 AM
RE: Why, Sir? - by rowens - 09-05-2013, 02:11 AM
RE: Why, Sir? - by Spikerider - 09-05-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Why, Sir? - by LittleOwl - 09-05-2013, 04:34 AM
RE: Why, Sir? - by sullsk - 09-05-2013, 02:29 PM



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